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MemaiShirosaki, February 22nd, 2011, 11:58 am

It's Will and his band of merry shoes (to quote an awesomepossum Chelsea) Probably will get around to updating the characters pages, as I realize that there all these characters besides the twins ;D

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MemaiShirosaki, February 25th, 2011, 3:30 am

Prof >> Hey girl hey ;D And ugh, Will, he was a fun beast to draw

Moblin >> Years of practice, deary Thank you!

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professorpineapple (Guest), February 24th, 2011, 4:28 pm

Lookin' pretty fly. As are his posse.

Moblin, February 24th, 2011, 8:45 pm

I love how nice and streight, and neat you make your lines. And how close together they are on dark hair :)

eishiya, March 1st, 2011, 6:09 pm

I've been sneaking peeks at this comic since it started, but the update schedule scared me off, so I didn't read it in full until now.

Herpderp cumulative feedback time. I did read through all the other comments you got, but I did so in one go so I likely forgot some. If I repeat something already said, please forgive me.

Flashbacks: Some are very clear, some are not. I think overall, it should not take conscious observation to notice that something is a flashback. We shouldn't have to notice the clothing, hair, setting, etc. This is why most comics use different panel styles - we pick them up on an almost subconscious level.
I think using thicker/thinner/double panel borders or rounded corners might help. If you're trying to keep the flashback panels as inline with the rest of the story as you can, then perhaps only round the corners of the flashback sequence as a whole - the outermost corners would be round, everything within would be normal.

Many of the faces are skewed to the right. I take it you're right-handed? When you sketch, use a mirror or hold the paper backwards up to the light to see the sketch backwards. This should help you pick out the skew and fix it before you ink.

There are often lines sticking out of the panels, which I feel detract from the otherwise very tidy art. Artist's/masking tape should help with those, particularly if you do your panel borders before you do the interior inks.

I didn't really like the grungy effect a few pages back. There is occasional dirtiness like that on the "clean" pages, perhaps that's why. It didn't feel unique/intentionally grungy.

I am curious - how do you do that wonderful hatching? It's so well-spaced and the lines stay parallel. Is that crazy pen skills or magic?

Sorry about the wall of text D:

MemaiShirosaki, March 2nd, 2011, 2:50 am

I really do appreciate constructive feedback, so having one in the wall o' text variety is more than enough

Oh my, how does the update schedule scare you? XD

Thank you for the tip on flashbacks; I'll incorporate that into the later pages :3

And I'm all too aware of my skewing problem, it's getting better though, well... at least I hope it is X_X

I'm careless at times, I think most of us are, but a lot of the time I don't catch little messes I've missed until after I've uploaded. I'll take better care next time :3

I use one these <a href="http://www.plazaart.com/images/1628/312_gp.jpg">babies right here</a>, rolling rulers :3 So it's not really crazy pen skills or magic, just crazy patience with the thing.

Honestly though, thank you so much for the feedback, it was super helpful!

meowkernaut, March 11th, 2011, 9:42 am

Eishiya has some good points, but that's also good you see 'em, too! ^_^

GOOD THING this isn't a printed comic. Thank goodness web comics can always be re-updated and fixed correctly!!!! (I've been needing to go back myself and redo some stuff) T____T


Anyway! I love these new chars you've introduced!!!! Already I'm wondering if they're friends or foes!

brianna (Guest), May 8th, 2012, 10:13 am

but aren't ruth and kelly girl names???

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